Feedback.

..This is the feedback I have received  from my teacher. I will be using this to improve and develope my digipak and poster before the deadline of November 9th.

Digipak Level 3    7 / 10

I have marked the one with primary colour letters and circles design.

Mr Smith likes the plain white one

WWW

Nice use of font and colour. Like image of band. Neat and clean feel (primary colours version).

EBI

Make THE all one word as there seems to be a space between t and h(primary colours version). Could poster link to digipak, as very different font and colours?

Legal jargon missing from all digi pacs. This MUST be included. Reduce size of font for website

If you’re going to have plane panels you MUST explain in your R&P why you made that decision

Poster  Level 2   6 /10

WWW

Neat, clean feel, minimalist as some bands in your genre are.

EBI

NME DON’T do star ratings, they do scores out of 10

Change font for stars to a more solid and plain design

Think about poster and CD continuity across products.

Reconsider font size for web and label, currently too large